Winterbrook 10 (NSFW)

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lirvilas
18th Feb 2016, 10:00 AM

Whoops, shot this one a little early. My apologies to anyone who was tuning in...

Don't worry, we'll be done with this weird sex stuff next page.

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ProfEtheric
18th Feb 2016, 10:04 AM

This is terrifying and/or hot... I'm torn.

I'm intrigued about the "enhanced interrogation techniques" (no waterboarding, please... :P)

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lirvilas
19th Feb 2016, 5:20 AM

/fade to black

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Rd Ashes
18th Feb 2016, 11:54 AM

I'm going to go with hot.
(I know, shocker)
I love Tona's little speech.
You might be going for badass, but it's also seriously cute.
I like how she ignores the photo and is looking at the coat.

Feel free to draw this "weird sex" stuff out for as many pages as you can want need.

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lirvilas
19th Feb 2016, 6:30 PM

Yeah, sorry about being slow to reply, but NSFW and all that... got to transition to the next segment in a hurry, I've only got until September to finish my story.

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jamie59
18th Feb 2016, 12:25 PM

Don't think it's water boarding but it's probably wet.

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lirvilas
19th Feb 2016, 6:30 PM

oh yes

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MadJak91
18th Feb 2016, 5:36 PM

I like Felicia (mostly how she looks lmao) but damn, I cannot decide whether she is just arrogant or thinks she too damn clever and always a step ahead when she is not.

Sam can be the same but he at least has guts to get stuff done.

...

Oh, a sex page...
hot, creepy etc. :D :D

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lirvilas
19th Feb 2016, 6:32 PM

Got done with the next segment's "draft" (it's all in my head) and I assure you this is pretty tame as far as physical threats.

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Centcomm
18th Feb 2016, 5:38 PM

Oh myyyyyyyy.....

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lirvilas
19th Feb 2016, 6:32 PM

/cue George Takei

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Stever
18th Feb 2016, 10:29 PM

That could be an effective technique :OOOOOO

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lirvilas
19th Feb 2016, 6:31 PM

Effective at what, though? :)

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anonymous coward
19th Feb 2016, 5:42 PM

Pasta damn it, I think I get what's going on here. Tona's being an ignorant hick and acting under anti-'carpetbagger' prejudices to avoid letting Felicia say anything she wants to say. She's going so far as to use 'enhanced interrogation techniques' which are widely known to be utterly unreliable, just because she's too afraid of getting a line of bullshit from Felicia. So she instead guarantees she gets a line of bullshit by freaking out Felicia beyond the capacity to string together rational responses? I guess Tona's more macho posturing and violence than brilliant planning.

Beautifully twisted.

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lirvilas
19th Feb 2016, 6:34 PM

Remember, kids, it's not "sex" if it's "torture" or "punishment".

Tona grew up pretty sheltered.

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anonymous coward
20th Feb 2016, 11:07 AM

Sheltered... sheltered against sanity I'd say if someone can claim that 'torture' and 'punishment' nullify something being sexual.

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