Winterbrook 9

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lirvilas
15th Feb 2016, 10:00 AM

F*** it, here's the next page. Dialogue was killing me, almost went silent on this one.

Any VDSD folks should go back a page for the advertised nudity (as opposed to today's borderline rapey lesbian BDSM, which apparently is less NSFW than a nipple).

Valentine's Day Sex Drive 2016


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ProfEtheric
15th Feb 2016, 10:40 AM

...I'm starting to get worried about my girl there...

I love the way you have pulled several tricks together in this one: silhouettes, closeups, and the wonderful between the legs shot.

And lirvilas? No disintegrations.

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lirvilas
15th Feb 2016, 8:55 PM

"Techniques" is what I call 'em, Prof.

I think the "between the legs" shot is probably a lirvilas cliche at this point.

"I just wanted to carve a little Z on your forehead" hahahahahaha

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jamie59
15th Feb 2016, 10:53 AM

Tona you didn't give her time to get naked too first.

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lirvilas
15th Feb 2016, 8:51 PM

TBD!

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Centcomm
15th Feb 2016, 12:17 PM

Oh crap....0_0

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lirvilas
15th Feb 2016, 8:52 PM

Oh crap indeed... the obsessive reader may recognize that knife.

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Rd Ashes
15th Feb 2016, 12:17 PM

You'd never know that you struggled with this dialogue.
Worked out well.

Love the rip in Felicia's stockings.

Looks like the power dynamic has changed dramatically here.
Go Tona!

PS … How come I can't rate your comic anymore?

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lirvilas
15th Feb 2016, 8:50 PM

Thanks for the compliments.

Ratings have been disabled as they do nothing for me.

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anonymous coward
15th Feb 2016, 1:40 PM

I recall mention that information would be extracted, for a price here... but there was no specificity as to who would be doing the extraction or what the price would be.

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lirvilas
15th Feb 2016, 8:56 PM

"extracted"

hmmm

how about

"inserted"

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Seabiscuit
15th Feb 2016, 5:07 PM

...Oh dear!
I'm starting to worry for her now as well D:

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lirvilas
15th Feb 2016, 8:56 PM

Who? Felicia or Tona?

Psychoooooooooo

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Centcomm
16th Feb 2016, 1:25 AM

Both!!!

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Stever
15th Feb 2016, 10:10 PM

Uh oh, she's her minds been taken captive by the moon nazis :O

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lirvilas
16th Feb 2016, 5:54 AM

The alternative dialogue for this page was more to the tune of "how dare you come into my house saying the things you're saying".

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sigpig
15th Feb 2016, 11:56 PM

I would have thought the sleeper hold rear-naked-choke would have... disabled... Felicia long enough for Tona to "properly" bind, restrain shackle her. And thank you for NOT moose-knuckling Tona. That would be a little OTT for this scene...

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Rd Ashes
16th Feb 2016, 2:47 AM

"moose-knuckling" LMAO

Nothing wrong with that, sir.
Nothing at all.

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lirvilas
16th Feb 2016, 5:55 AM

Um, yeah, that's not how the references panned out... over the top indeed.

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sigpig
16th Feb 2016, 1:21 PM

Moose-knuckle (n): the camel-toe's angrier, more violent sister.

...Did I just make you blush? lol

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lirvilas
16th Feb 2016, 5:42 PM

Hence the second half of your usertitle/MOS

Yes, I'm blushing because seriously this was something I edited out of the final page.

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sigpig
17th Feb 2016, 2:17 AM

"SigBrain" does it again... lol

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MadJak91
16th Feb 2016, 1:31 AM

Oh, this reminds me of videos some guys used to watch during breaks during high school.
Some of that was actual wrestling. Some not.

I am not sure about the knife though D:
A whip is one thing but... but...

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ProfEtheric
16th Feb 2016, 2:41 AM

Psst... do you remember the knife, Jak?

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MadJak91
16th Feb 2016, 4:28 AM

Thanks! I do now :D
So it remained there...
Still not sure about using it D:

I am surprised that was uploaded a year ago. Pretty much.
Well played.

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lirvilas
16th Feb 2016, 5:55 AM

"some guys"

sure, RD.

I mean--MJ.

ha

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MadJak91
16th Feb 2016, 6:14 AM

I meant some guys at school.
??

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