Autumn Bay 9

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lirvilas
12th Nov 2015, 10:00 AM

Cheesy? Hell yes. But DING DING let's get it on!

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Milk
12th Nov 2015, 10:14 AM

Wow, hahaha, they got served.


....poor Chuck. :(

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lirvilas
12th Nov 2015, 11:42 AM

A few more courses coming in this meal.

But yeah, it's difficult to eat with a mouth full of broken teeth.

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sigpig
12th Nov 2015, 7:16 PM

Or with their jaws wired shut...

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Stever
12th Nov 2015, 10:28 AM

What a kick ass way to show a fight!

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lirvilas
12th Nov 2015, 11:41 AM

Thanks! Necessity is the mother****er of invention!

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ProfEtheric
12th Nov 2015, 10:55 AM

BRAVO! ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!

(Why do I have the terrible feeling that the other shoe is about to drop? Things don't usually go this smooth for ANYONE in the LIRverse...)

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lirvilas
12th Nov 2015, 11:11 AM

SMOOTH?! Chuck and company are getting their asses kicked!!

Oh wait, you're cheering for Aegis. Nevermind.

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ProfEtheric
12th Nov 2015, 11:14 AM

Duh...

To me AEGIS is the home team. I feel a bit bad for poor dumb Chuck, though. (Though he might actually ENJOY what Elektra is doing to him...)

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lirvilas
12th Nov 2015, 11:15 AM


Edit: Simple to depict, but that four foot pylon of carbon-fibre and steel that Lake calls a "Tonfa" adds a lot of expressiveness to the action above. TLDR: nuthin like beatin a man with a stick

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Rd Ashes
12th Nov 2015, 11:22 AM

It looks like he's stomping him at one point!
MY GOD IS THAT BLOOD?!?

I'm laughing and horrified at the same time!

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ProfEtheric
12th Nov 2015, 11:37 AM

Re-reading with your comments, Rd, and I am super LMAO. Nothing like "viewing" with friends!

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Rd Ashes
12th Nov 2015, 11:17 AM

:-O

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lirvilas
13th Nov 2015, 9:25 AM

>:)

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HeSerpenty
12th Nov 2015, 11:26 AM

That's a pretty clever way to illustrate a fight sequence, man! I just love the silhouettes!!

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lirvilas
12th Nov 2015, 11:40 AM

A couple reasons for this:

-They're fighting on a rooftop, being observed from below by Mr. Alexander.

-I had another page in the works (still is) with a hell of a lot less action and let's face it you guys are only here for the blood.

-Time constraints.

-IMHO if an artist can't convey powerful poses--which are the crux of working with silhouettes--an artist has no damn business doing action sequences.

I am glad this page finds your approval!

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MadJak91
12th Nov 2015, 10:59 PM

I am not sure what you can do against that mountain of a guy alone.
Without guns...

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lirvilas
13th Nov 2015, 9:22 AM

I may address the lack of gunplay in the next page...

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Seabiscuit
13th Nov 2015, 2:00 AM

That's one awesome and effective fight scene!
And...going entirely as expected!

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lirvilas
13th Nov 2015, 9:23 AM

Man, like nobody here has any faith in Chuck's ability to win in a tough spot... :)

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anonymous coward
14th Nov 2015, 9:51 AM

I don't get this. If Aegis Securitech is trying to intimidate Maerc Security Ventures personnel by beating them up, assuming that they're a bunch of unprofessional jackasses... shouldn't they be worried that these unprofessional jackasses might pull knives or guns thinking that's a better choice than spending months in the hospital? In Maximum Speed and Violence, the Maerc personnel seem to have often gotten away with literal murder, so why wouldn't they try it here?
If Chuck and Ivan don't reach for the knives and guns they ought to be done though: Muscles, joints and/or bones should have been broken with some of these hits Ivan has been getting, even if Chuck has been taking the hits for fun because he's a masochist. It also remains to be seen just how much Chuck has withstood 'Agent Elektra' tazing him: That stuff has kills surprisingly often, even though other times it barely slows the target down as well.

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lirvilas
14th Nov 2015, 10:48 AM

Thank you for clarifying the dialogue on an upcoming page.

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anonymous coward
14th Nov 2015, 1:09 PM

Uhh... you're welcome, glad to accidentally help with debugging. One of my talents is finding the word other people need like a thesaurus that's actually idiot-friendly, but I don't know that I can be easily available to help with such things since I'm browsing at work while in the act of working.

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NeilKapit
15th Nov 2015, 2:52 PM

The only thing more fun than gratuitous violence is gratuitous violence entirely in silhouette. Though I guess that makes it not gratuitous.

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lirvilas
18th Nov 2015, 2:27 PM

I like this effect a great deal, but now that I've sprung this trick once we'll see if it recurs anytime soon. Novelty is lost in the repetition.

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