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lirvilas
30th May 2016, 10:00 AM

Chess pieces.

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jamie59
30th May 2016, 11:23 AM

Chess? That last one looks like he belongs with Rock 'em Sock 'em Robots.

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lirvilas
30th May 2016, 12:00 PM

Cannon is the Rook.

Which isn't as uh racially tinged as it might sound... as you've noticed he's built like a friggin' castle keep.

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anonymous coward
30th May 2016, 11:51 AM

...Waiting for it.

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lirvilas
30th May 2016, 12:03 PM

Or face cards. I mix all kinds of damn metaphors in this work; maybe thinking things through with a script next time will reduce that propensity.

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anonymous coward
30th May 2016, 1:05 PM

Huh, wait, are you asking me for an opinion or advice on scripting?

I'm not much of a producer of sequential comics, but for long-form fiction the way I recommend working is to have a firm dossier on your characters and your setting details, along with a chronology of everything that happens. I doubt you need me to tediously list and explain the pros and cons of that approach. :)

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ProfEtheric
30th May 2016, 11:54 AM

"Katya"'s question is a good one. Just what IS "Agent Cannon" doing here?

"Initiation"... THAT sounds like fun!

Oh, and since MSV has GOT to be spread a little thin, it would be unfortunate for them if any other agencies took advantage of this... Just saying...

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lirvilas
30th May 2016, 11:58 AM

Prof, random question: you ever see that one nature show where an elephant gets attacked by a pride of starving lions?

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ProfEtheric
30th May 2016, 12:03 PM

You ever seen an elephant get attacked by hunters with high-powered rifles, sir? :P

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lirvilas
30th May 2016, 12:13 PM

Too close for missiles, switching to PMs.

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MadJak91
30th May 2016, 5:56 PM

Lel. M(r)s. Whatever-fake-name has real class coming there dressed like that :D

inb4 Elliot plays absolutely everyone.
His involvement always confused me and goals more so. No, I do not like him because I do not have enough statistical data to read him properly and there is a lot of fluctuation to make satisfying suspected conclusions... yet :T
Feels like Sonya is losing her edge.

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lirvilas
2nd Jun 2016, 5:27 AM

-Elliot's one of those challenging-to-write characters because he's supposed to be a fair bit smarter than the author. Now, I don't mean to detract from my own mental horsepower, but I'm no gifted polymath entrepreneur.

-Sonja is indeed losing it.

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Stever
30th May 2016, 9:47 PM

I like her tattoos, Two green charlie brown lines and a spider's elbow.

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lirvilas
2nd Jun 2016, 5:31 AM

She's got ink in four more places... talk about bad life decisions on my part, because I hate drawing all that stuff all the time.

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Nef
1st Jun 2016, 3:36 AM

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Stever stole my comment. I'm going to report it to the comment protection program...

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lirvilas
2nd Jun 2016, 5:32 AM

Yeah, I don't know what it is about the damn tattoos... I like 'em.

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