Winterbrook 1

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lirvilas
9th May 2016, 10:00 AM

Yeah, here comes the end: a wedding or maybe just a bunch of funerals...

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jamie59
9th May 2016, 11:25 AM

Always go for the woman who knows what to do with a wrench. while it may be fun to watch I wouldn't recommend working on a truck dressed like that.

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lirvilas
9th May 2016, 12:49 PM

Answer: Maureen *doesn't* know what to do with a wrench (or a vice grips), as you'll see shortly.

Tona is usually the one who keeps the truck running.

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ProfEtheric
9th May 2016, 12:44 PM

Maureen is hereby under the protection of certain forces. It appears she is one or more of the following: poor, tired, broken, beaten, damned...

I don't even see a "Sammy's gettin' some" joke here...

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anonymous coward
9th May 2016, 12:58 PM

I don't see how that would protect anyone from anything. If anything, it should predispose someone to suffer more of same wouldn't it?

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lirvilas
9th May 2016, 4:43 PM

@Prof, @AC: Damn it, I think I need to switch to a "launch as fast as I can draw 'em schedule" because I want to get this scene over with ASAP, because I don't know how you trolls are gonna take it... I know you're all here for the snuff films gun violence and frankly that isn't happening in Winterbrook this time around.

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anonymous coward
9th May 2016, 8:02 PM

If you wanna do things that aren't violent that's cool too as long as you stay a sufficient level of awesome, funny and/or insightful. Considering past experience, you're pretty good at this. I won't deny that I have a taste for carnage, and particularly main characters dying though.

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anonymous coward
9th May 2016, 1:02 PM

Multiple hints at interesting things yet to be revealed (or concealed?): What brings Sam all the way out here to visit Tona? Tona has been busy with what since we saw her raided by MSV? How has the disagreement over Trinity's upbringing progressed? Is Sam any less incompetent with engines than Maureen?

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Stever
9th May 2016, 9:25 PM

Ooh, she's all greased up. ;D

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lirvilas
10th May 2016, 5:52 AM

Yes... yes she is.

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MadJak91
10th May 2016, 1:36 AM

I trust my sensible boy Sam to set a few things right. He was kinda in the background but I still have expectations of him.
Expectations you are going to betray but I guess that is how it is going to be... Hm.

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lirvilas
10th May 2016, 5:54 AM

This is the chapter where we say goodbye.

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ProfEtheric
10th May 2016, 2:25 AM

Forgot to post this part: your scenery game is on point, sir. The contrail, those clouds, the birds... it feels very ALIVE.

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lirvilas
10th May 2016, 5:55 AM

Heh heh.

I layer failed and accidentally deleted the clouds I had before.

I like this much better.

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Spelledeg
10th May 2016, 5:51 AM

Your panel composition game is on point, this is really fluid in how it reads....and there's a huge somber overhang in the atmosphere, even though it's really clear and sunny.

I wonder how this meeting is going to go. Maureen looks really sad.

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lirvilas
10th May 2016, 9:30 AM

Subconscious theft from Springsteen's Empty Sky? Of course, he was talking about contrails, too.

Just remember: from this moment everything gets better.

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Rd Ashes
10th May 2016, 12:28 PM

Hahaha, here comes the end for sure.

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lirvilas
10th May 2016, 2:01 PM

You did this, RD!

The Let It Ride death watch list:
-Felicia Kingsley
-Samuel Christianos
-Maureen Zehm
-Chuck Braun

Eric's got more lives than a cat, so I won't waste my time trolling that one.

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Rd Ashes
11th May 2016, 12:07 PM

Mah-hahahahahaha
If that means what I think it means then I'm a very happy girl.
'cause tables would be flipping over here if you kill off my favourite character!
FLIPPING.

;-)

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lirvilas
11th May 2016, 2:02 PM

All that list means is that I've figured out how to... accomplish what I need to accomplish.

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Milk
11th May 2016, 1:57 PM

As always, you're boss at vertical composition/visual integration. :o

(Jealousy.)

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lirvilas
12th May 2016, 11:28 AM

Sempai, don't be jealous of my laziness!

something something Lao Tzu

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