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lirvilas
21st Jul 2016, 10:00 AM

Because some people can't help but watch.

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ProfEtheric
21st Jul 2016, 11:40 AM

Of course she has to watch. She has to put food on the table somehow.

Just so we're clear, we have (if I am not mistaken):

1) Felicia gets out of the trunk of the stopped car after Happy got her away from the scene of her attempted rapemurder and will now be witness to whatever parts of this are big enough to see from the street.

2) Tona has been detained by Aegis pursuant and may soon have some face time with the local LEOs. Something something parole violation...

3) Aisel is beyond pissed and wants to take out the betrayer.

4) Cannon has been sent to find and neutralize Aisel. Gulp.

5) Eric is about to introduce even more chaos into the equation.

Damn. Love the "quick cut/montage" effect here.

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lirvilas
21st Jul 2016, 4:52 PM

In this game aces are wild.

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Rd Ashes
21st Jul 2016, 12:41 PM

He likes to watch just like any other self-respecting serial killer.

I love your transition with the moon.
You're becoming the master of transitions.

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lirvilas
21st Jul 2016, 12:59 PM

RD-

Woulda put a crescent up there, but May 23 was 98% full.

Thanks!

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ProfEtheric
21st Jul 2016, 2:10 PM

Uh-oh, sir. I'm not sure if this is a penalty flag or what, but the referees are discussing.

Did Sonja put her clothes BACK on?

If so, I'm guessing the initiation is kaput.

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lirvilas
21st Jul 2016, 4:28 PM

Prof-

That was a "flash forward".

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ProfEtheric
21st Jul 2016, 4:39 PM

Roger that. Pardon mild confusion. :)

-5 points to House Proffindor

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Call Me Tom
21st Jul 2016, 5:18 PM

I lack words.

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anonymous coward
21st Jul 2016, 5:29 PM

If you're trying to render too many things happening at once for anyone to ever know the full story, good job. Without ProfEther providing a handy explanation of who everyone is in those panels I might not have been able to make sense of all of it without spending more effort at it than I can afford today.

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lirvilas
21st Jul 2016, 7:29 PM

Over ambitious? Perhaps.
Indecipherable? Certainly.

I've talked through much of this with Prof, but even he's got maybe 35% of the story.

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anonymous coward
22nd Jul 2016, 6:58 AM

I'll give you this: Real life is usually just as opaque, if not more so. Perhaps more salient questions are what your artistic agenda is, and how much you intended to confuse the reader.

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ProfEtheric
22nd Jul 2016, 11:19 AM

@ lirv: I presume things will become clear in time. I know I am looking forward to this poohstorm unfolding.

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jamie59
22nd Jul 2016, 10:51 AM

Master fire alarm control why do I see something only slightly less disastrous than large ships colliding?

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Spelledeg
22nd Jul 2016, 11:19 PM

HOLY CRAP

Let's see how this all falls apart.
Mood is on point and wowwowow.

Tona and Sonja in the same place.

I expect some water works soon in more than one way.

No Chuck on this page.

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lirvilas
22nd Jul 2016, 11:24 PM

edit: oh wait let's just go with a PM

personal threats are delivered best thata way

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